Section III Writing

Part B

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should

  1. describe the picture briefly,

  2. interpret the implied meaning, and

  3. give your comments.

2022年全国研究生统一入学考试英语(一)

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【总体分析】:

信息解析:①左侧的女生认为与所学专业无关的讲座无益于自身发展,说明她没能意识到适当涉猎其他领域的潜在益处。②右侧的女生认为即便讲座与所学专业无关,也能从中有所收获,说明她拥有积极开放的求知态度。2.图画寓意:结合当下“推动跨专业、跨学科学习”的趋势,可判断图片意在鼓励大学生在扎实推进专业学习的基础上,通过涉猎其他领域的知识、掌握各种实用技能以实现全面提升。3.行文思路:第一段描述图片→第二段揭示图片寓意,展开说明论证→第三段总结观点,发出呼吁。


【范文】:

The picture portrays two female studentscontrasting reactions to an upcoming lecture. The one on the left dismisses the lecture as nearly worthless because it has nothing to do with their major. The one on the right, meanwhile, views it in a positive light, saying that there must be some kind of benefit they can gain from it.

The picture is intended to encourage us to acquire knowledge from a wide range of disciplines. This will equip us with various expertise and skills necessary for adapting to an increasingly competitive and ever-changing job market, in which those with an interdisciplinary background are more likely to stand out. Furthermore, even if we are determined to pursue a career closely related to our college major, exposing ourselves to different fields will provide a wider perspective on a complicated issue and help us move away from a fixed mindset. A compelling example is Qian Xuesen, who set aside time for literary and art theories while majoring in mechanical engineering. It was this experience that opened his mind to a myriad of ideas, thereby enabling him to adopt flexible and innovative approaches to daunting challenges in the aerospace sector.

In sum, all-around self-improvement requires us to proactively break down the barriers between our chosen field of study. To put it in a nutshell, we should place weight on the breadth as well as depth of knowledge.

图片描绘了两名女生对一场即将举办的讲座截然不同的反应。左侧的女生认为讲座几乎无用,因为与她们的专业无关。与之相比,右侧的女生则从积极的角度看待这场讲座,她表示从中肯定能有所收获。

图片旨在鼓励我们广泛摄取各学科的知识。这将使我们具备各种必要的专业知识和技能以适应竞争越发激烈、变化越发迅猛的就业市场,拥有跨学科背景的人更有可能从中脱颖而出。此外,即便我们决心从事与大学专业密切相关的职业,接触不同的领域也能使我们拓宽看待复杂问题的视角,有助于我们摆脱思维定势。一个有说服力的例子是钱学森,他在主修机械工程的同时抽出时间研究文学和艺术理论。正是这段经历让他接触到各种各样的观点,开拓了他的思维,从而使他能够以灵活创新的方式应对航空航天领域的艰巨挑战。

总之,全面提升自我需要我们主动破除所选专业的壁垒。简而言之,除了知识的深度,我们也应注重知识的广度。


【写作模板】:

适用于人生哲理类作文,图片对比呈现两(类)人不同的态度,引导年轻人树立积极正确的价值观。

In the picture, there are two ________ with different attitudes to ________. More exactly, one of them ________, whereas the other ________.

The picture reflects two distinct ways of looking at ________, which arise from different perceptions of the necessity of ________.The one on the left/right represents those who tend to underestimate the value of ________. Such a negative attitude may hinder them from ________.In contrast, the one on the right/lelt can be counted as a typical example of staunch advocates of ________, who are much more likely to succeed in ________. Take ________, a prominent figure in ________, as an example. The importance he/she attaches to ________ has played an irreplaceable role in his/her remarkable achievements so far such as ________.

Therefore, it is advisable to make a conscious/deliberate effort to cultivate ________, which will enable us to achieve our life goals over the long run. More to the point, we should also deliver this positive energy to everyone around us, so as to fill our society with vitality and happiness.

图中有两名________,他们对________态度有别。确切来说,其中一人________而另一人________。

图片反映了两种截然不同的看待________的方式,这两种方式源于对________的必要性的不同看法。左/右侧的人代表那些倾向于低估________价值的人。这样的消极态度可能会阻碍他们________。与之相对,右/左侧的人可以算是________的坚定支持者的典范,他们更有可能在________上取得成功。以________领域的杰出人物________为例。他/她对________的重视对于他/她迄今为止取得诸如_________的卓越成就起到了不可替代的作用。

因此,可取的做法是有意识地培养________,从长远来看这有助于我们实现人生目标。更重要的是,我们还应该将这种正能量传递给周围所有人,以使我们的社会充满活力与幸福。


【评分标准】:

评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有1-3分的调节分。评分时酌情考虑拼写与标点符号对于正常交际和表达的影响程度,英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

第一档

很好地完成了试题规定的任务(17-20分)

  1. 包含所有内容要点(内容与形式的统一,与主题相扣);
  2. 运用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
  3. 语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;
  4. 有效地采用了多种衔接方法,文字连贯,层次清晰;
  5. 格式与语域恰当贴切;

第二档

较好地完成了试题规定的任务(13-16分)

  1. 包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉1-2个次重点;
  2. 使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
  3. 语言基本正确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别语法错误;
  4. 采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,层次较严密;
  5. 格式与语域较恰当;

第三档

基本完成了试题规定的任务(9-12分)

  1. 虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点;
  2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;
  3. 有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;
  4. 采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰;
  5. 格式和语域基本合理

第四档

未能按要求完成试题规定的任务(5-8分)

  1. 漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容;
  2. 语法结构单调、词汇有限;
  3. 有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;
  4. 未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性;
  5. 格式和语域不恰当;
  6. 未能清楚地传达信息

第五档

未完成试题规定的任务(1-4分)

  1. 明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容;
  2. 语法和词汇单调、重复;
  3. 语言错误多,影响读者内容理解,语言运用能力差;
  4. 未采用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段;
  5. 无格式和语域概念;
  6. 未能传达信息

零分档

  1. 所传达的信息或所使用语言太少;
  2. 内容与要求无关或无法辨认