Section III Writing

Part B

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should

  1. describe the picture briefly.

  2. interpret the implied meaning, and

  3. give your comments.

真好啊,咱们村的龙舟赛越来越热闹了

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【总体分析】:

1.信息解析:某村的龙舟比赛热闹非凡,河岸上挤满了观众,表明公众对于龙舟赛这项传统运动项目的兴致很高。观赛群众中的一位老太太对老伴说:“真好啊,咱们村的龙舟赛越来越热闹了!”,表明龙舟比赛越来越受到重视,让村里的节日氛围越发浓烈。2.图画寓意:本图以小见大,反映了人们保护和弘扬传统文化的热情越发高涨。此外,图片场景为乡村,也可从“传统文化活动助力乡村旅游发展与振兴”的角度解读。3.行文思路:第一段描述图片→第二段揭示图片寓意,阐述意义→第三段总结观点,发出呼吁。


【范文】:

In the picture, two teams of dragon boat racers arepaddling vigorously through the water, with crowds both onthe bridge and along the banks cheering them on. Delightedby this scene, an elderly lady says to her spouse,“It ireally wonderful that the dragon boat racing in our village isbecoming increasingly popular and exciting!;

The picture demonstrates the public's great interest intraditional Chinese culture and customs. Nowadays, many Chinese people participate in various cultural activities either during special festivals or in daily life, from which they not only derive pleasure but also acquire deeper knowledge about their own history and culture. Moreover,these activities help provide further impetus for rural revitalization. For example, villagers promote intangible cultural heritage through sports events, art performances or craft fairs in an effort to attract visitors from far and wide.

In summary, holding cultural events in the countryside is a commendable and sustainable way both to keep timehonored cultural traditions alive and to facilitate rural development. We, as the younger generation, are also responsible for doing what we can to preserve Chinese culture and give back to our hometown.

图中,两支龙舟参赛队伍正奋力划桨在水中穿行,聚集在桥上以及沿岸的观众在为其呐喊助威。看到这一场景,一位老奶奶高兴地和老伴说道:“真好啊,咱们村的龙舟赛越来越热闹了!”

图片展现了公众对中国传统文化和习俗的浓厚兴趣。如今,不论是在特殊节日期间还是在平日生活中,许多中国人都会参与各种文化活动,从这些活动中他们不但获得了乐趣,也加深了对自身历史与文化的了解。此外,这些活动还有助于进一步推动乡村振兴。比如,村民们会通过体育赛事、文艺展演或手工艺品展销会来推广非物质文化遗产以期吸引各地的游客前来参观。

总之,在乡村举办文化活动是一种值得推崇且可持续的方式,既能让历史悠久的文化传统得以留存,又能促进乡村发展。我们作为年轻一代,也有责任为保护中国文化、回馈自己的家乡做些力所能及的事。


【写作模板】:

The above picture depicts a lively scene in which ________. Delighted by this joyful scene full of energy and optimism, a/an ________ says in a positive tone that ________.

This picture reflects a heartening phenomenon of our current society. Thanks to ________, a growing number of. This trend has so far made people have begun to ________, a very positive impact, and residents have reportedgeneral satisfaction with it. For instance, many people affirm that the increase in ________ has contributed to ________. Another example which illustrates the positive influence of this trend is that ________.

Based on the above analysis, it is reasonable to conclude that we should continue to encourage this trend. Policywise, the government should endeavor to ________. As for individuals, we should pay more attention to ________.

上图描绘了一个热闹的场景,其中概述画面。欣喜于这充满活力和正能量的欢快景象,一位人物以积极的口吻说图片文字

这幅图反映了我们当前社会中一个令人鼓舞的现象。由于原因,越来越多的人开始现象的具体内容。到目前为止,这一趋势已经产生了非常积极的影响,居民们对该趋势普遍表示满意。例如,许多人肯定地称积极事物/品质等的增加促进了积极影响 1。另一个说明这一趋势的积极影响的例子是积极影响 2

基于上述分析,我们有理由得出结论:我们应该继续鼓励这种趋势。从政策上讲,政府应该努力对政府的建议。至于个人,我们应该更加关注对个人的建议


【评分标准】:

评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有1-3分的调节分。评分时酌情考虑拼写与标点符号对于正常交际和表达的影响程度,英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

第一档

很好地完成了试题规定的任务(17-20分)

  1. 包含所有内容要点(内容与形式的统一,与主题相扣);
  2. 运用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
  3. 语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;
  4. 有效地采用了多种衔接方法,文字连贯,层次清晰;
  5. 格式与语域恰当贴切;

第二档

较好地完成了试题规定的任务(13-16分)

  1. 包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉1-2个次重点;
  2. 使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
  3. 语言基本正确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别语法错误;
  4. 采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,层次较严密;
  5. 格式与语域较恰当;

第三档

基本完成了试题规定的任务(9-12分)

  1. 虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点;
  2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;
  3. 有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;
  4. 采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰;
  5. 格式和语域基本合理

第四档

未能按要求完成试题规定的任务(5-8分)

  1. 漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容;
  2. 语法结构单调、词汇有限;
  3. 有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;
  4. 未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性;
  5. 格式和语域不恰当;
  6. 未能清楚地传达信息

第五档

未完成试题规定的任务(1-4分)

  1. 明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容;
  2. 语法和词汇单调、重复;
  3. 语言错误多,影响读者内容理解,语言运用能力差;
  4. 未采用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段;
  5. 无格式和语域概念;
  6. 未能传达信息

零分档

  1. 所传达的信息或所使用语言太少;
  2. 内容与要求无关或无法辨认